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June 19th, 2003, 06:36 AM
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Cyalaytr
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?You?re Keeping Me Awake?
As I rest upon top of my bed and try to get some sleep?. a faint picture of your face pounds in the back of my mind, keeping me awake.The music plays softly on and yet I am so distraced by the thought of you, I can?t even begin to remember the song. I think and remember the little time that we?ve spent together and wonder why the thought of you comes to me so strong. I come to realize that I really must rest. I try to convince myself that you would never be thinking about me in this way?. So maybe if I try, I can cry myself to sleep. I remember your face; your eyes; and most of all your smile. I?ve seen them all and they all drive me wild. So as long as there is even the slightest doubt in my mind that you and I could ever be?.. I won?t be able to sleep peacefully.
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June 22nd, 2003, 07:21 PM
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HB Forum Owner
again... lots of emotion put in this one.
its really clear.
but i think it should say:
"as i rest upon the top of my bed"
or better yet....
"as i rest upon my bed"
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